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  1. Jules h
    July 18, 2019

    Definitely could use some editing but the material in general was very helpful.

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  2. CB
    July 12, 2020

    A good, concise summary, but would appreciate a bit more detail, such as varied uses of charcoal (art, medicine etc.). Glad you mentioned the impact on communities and wildlife, but I would also highlight the poisonous aspect of coal, whereas charcoal is sometimes ingested by humans and animals. Although wording in some places was quite clear, in others it was vague, obscure (“plats” and “plant trumps”), or missing grammatical elements such as articles or prepositions (“in a region contains water”) and apparent typos (“which leads to deforestation and ultimately deforestation”).

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